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Badly Ironed Shirt
I did. But the opening line made me wonder "How much of this is actually a story - they have started the article with a premise".
It wasn't necessary - they could just have started with their second paragraph. Since the article started with, essentially, a question (and no question mark at that) and not a fact it made the rest of the article less credible.
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